Here's a couple things I see with Rory for comparison:
First picture: On take-away, you're WAY inside. This basically forces you to loop at the top and get steep and come over the top. You want the clubhead to cover your hands (give or take) when the shaft is parallel with the group. Another comparison point is the shaft to be on your toe line
Second Picture: Not a bad spot up top, just get that shaft pointed at the target instead of right of the target. That will help shallow out the club on the downswing.
Third picture: Super steep. I'm kinda ambivalent on George Gankas, but he does a great job demonstrating proper transition. Flatten that club out and as The Byrds say, "Turn! turn! turn!" Like said above, you want to attack the ball from the inside (4th picture of Rory)
I'm not a swing coach, so this definitely doesn't compare to getting a lesson, but a few things to work on in the mean time!